Them Lucky Stars
Dear fatherOf the weakenedCan you hear meWhen Im speaking?Ive tried yellingAnd screamingBut it seems likeMy words have no meaningI wish someone would unlock this doorCause I cant take this anymoreIm...
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there is such familiarity here, marc ... locked within a cage of regret and pain ... and worst of all, feeling so unheard ... knowing that no one understands ... I hear ya ... this was powerful and so...
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Oh Marc this is SO beautiful, I mean the longing just to be heard amid the chaos and confusion , and begging for a well sought out forgiveness for your actions ...So beautiful and so powerful, really...
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oooh i loved this.... liked the rhyming throughout and the way that it seemed to be building up and up to the endPowerful writing...you expressed the confusion and hurt to a t
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Marc,I enjoyed this. I liked the way the poem built upon itself throughout giving the reader the feeling of anxiety, hopelessness, hurt etc. I have been in the same "cage" and what I have found is we...
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